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I would bleed an eternity for you,
yet would you do the same for me?
You ask me if you should stay,
when I wish you would tell me you want to.
At times your mind seems so far away,
why can't we start again, become like new?
It becomes so hard just like today,
sometimes it's like you have no clue.


I would do anything to make you happy,
yet would you do the same for me?
Withstanding this hurt for a hope that seems so far away,
when you just make countless hurtful mistakes.
I wonder if you care the way I do,
the way your friends are like your glue.
You put them before your flickering love,
yet would they do the same for you?
"I'll never do it again", is what you say.
My heart bleeds now for you,
am I tortured enough to finally say adieu?


My heart of hearts is cracking, about to shatter,
the once burning fire now turning into a dim ember.
Am I forced to be a withering dweller?
Having my heart feel like it's been crushed with a hammer?
I would patch up your failing heart, baby,
yet would you do the same for me?
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Just blowing off some sorrow. Please ignore the mistakes. I just wanted to get
things off of my chest...say it out loud in a place where he can't hear.

Would you do the same for me?....

I might be slow in responding for a couple days. I need to clear the swiveling energy in my head.
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*takarayume Jan 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Mnn I really am no good at um cheering people up or offering moral support, I don't think I can say pretty words and sugar-coat things and say everything will get better, life isn't always easy nor rainbows and sunshine, so it will be harsh, though just as their are harsh days, their are nice and calm ones too, you just have to wait for the storm to pass by I guess, if you're patient enough, then maybe, things will look up, put optimistically anyways. I'm not sure if I've felt this way before though, since I hardly keep to mind how I feel or what I've felt, so I apologize if I cannot return the sentiments. ; 3 ; Everyone experiences tough times, we all just have to pull through.

Your poem was quite sad and well I feel really bad that you have to experience these things, and I may really be horrible with this wording thing, despite wanting to make things better for my friends, but just so you know, as a quote from what I heard of before that really inspired me not to give up, is that if it's not happy then it's no the end. Hopefully I got that right. ; 7 ; Ahh and feel better soon, Reicchi..:iconuhuhuhuplz:
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=Reiyaa Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

Thank you
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I feel better now. :heart:
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Mood: Love *takarayume Jan 18, 2013  Student General Artist
It's no prob, Reicchi. :iconbrohugplz: glad I could help somehow--:iconaawplz: ; 7 ;))/
Just take it easy~:iconpetpetplz:
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~Choko-Pwince Jan 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
;______; i think i felt as if the words were giving me this feeling i can't explain.... (in a good way =D)
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~Tai-zhi Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Of course I would do the same for you! QvQ Using poetry is a great medium for venting!
I shall hug you :iconsupertighthugplz: forever! :iconsupertighthugplz::iconsupertighthugplz::iconsupertighthugplz:
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~HoshiUsagi Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Uneasy feeling.. .___.
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~Cocatrola Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Loving this poem!
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~cddmanful Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
GAAAhhhh--he seems to want to have his cake and eat it too....to have you, and have you forgive him for all his weaknesses, and give only less than half of himself to the relationship--and still keep you, so to speak. He could do much better, much much better :icongrrrplz:
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~cddmanful Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I mean he could give all of himself to the relationship, as he ought to....I think love is supposed to be each one wanting all good for the other. Hun, you deserve better!
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:< so it wasn't just me that felt like there was something bothering you from your last reply.

i would definitely do the same for you and i do hope you cheer up soon. if you ever need a shoulder to cry on, and even though i know a lot of people have probably told you this already, and even though we just met, i can tell your someone i'll be there for no matter what and will want to be there for!

your intelligent, kind, caring, and probably very gorgeous and it makes a part of my heart feel like it's hurting too. and that may seem kind of weird to you but when i become friends with someone i trust them with all my heart from the very beginning and if something bothers them i want to be there to help and knowing i can't be able to help you right now makes me want to cry. //tearingupatm

but anyways, if you want to talk to me and just vent i'm here. i don't know if i can respond right away, but i'll always be here for you.. <3
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