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Ryo looked down at the tombstone and observed her fathers engraved name glistening in the sun.  It still pained her to see the engraving as it brought forth the horrible truth that he was now gone.

Tears formed in Ryo’s eyes and she could feel her heart pumping blood quickly through her veins. Her eyes stung and her vision blurred as she remembered his sick, fragile body in the hospital bed.  His skin was void of any color and he lacked the strength left to fight. She recalled him gasping for his last labored breath until his body finally collapsed, releasing his soul to enter the other world, a universe of pleasant memories and loved ones.  This should comfort her but instead, it brought her more tears.  Her legs began to tremble and grow weak and she grasped the tombstone to keep herself from falling.  It was a cold hard truth that gastric cancer had taken her father and as she leaned down and softly rubbed the tombstone, she wished she had been taken, too.

She fell to the ground as her knees were unable to hold her weight for any longer.  Her arms began to quiver as the recollections of her father flashed within her mind.  They tormented her; plagued her mind and she yearned to be set free from them. What did she do to deserve such agony?  She went to bed each night and awoke the next morning thinking of all the things she could have done differently.  She remembered those times where she had yelled at her father and when she had ignored or infuriated him.  If one wish could be granted in this moment of time, she would have wished to start over and be the amazing daughter she could have been. She longed to be happy again and to feel content.  Ryo was tired, so very tired of hiding in the shadow of her own remorse.

Here is a paragraph commission for :iconpucchinri: She requested it to be about Ryo mourning over her father and his death.

Sorry for the slow progress in commissions! ^^;
I'll try to work as quickly as possible!

Hope you enjoy!! (:

Time: 1 hour.
Characters and back story *pucchinri
Story to Alyssa Landau AKA =Reiyaa on DA only.
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:iconshadowmoonfire:
so short yet so cruel wahhhhh your way of writing make it sound so sad :iconcraplz:
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Reiyaa Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer


I'm just happy you liked it!
Yes it was only a paragraph commission XD
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iKestrel Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist
Cooooooooooool
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Reiyaa Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer

Thank you ^^ <3
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:iconroweniichan:
This is so amazing, how touching it is...

Nice one ^^ Sweetie!!
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Reiyaa Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer

I'm very happy you enjoyed it! Thank you my sweets. :heart:
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:iconroweniichan:
Welcome, my dear!
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takarayume Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Aww, this is quite sad. ; ^ ; too bad it's so short, I wish it could've been longer. But as usual, well done~ ^^
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Reiyaa Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know but it was only a paragraph commissions ;~:
I'm very happy you enjoyed it though. <3
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takarayume Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
haha but it's fine~ <33 you did great still~ <33 ^^ keep it up~ <33
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