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Oath -- rough draft

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I had a choice to make. It was simple, or at least was deemed as such by my superiors. I committed my life to an oath, a series of sentences that branded and controlled my life—almost as much as Eva Castle controlled me. I’m constantly torn between my honor and this woman. I prayed that somehow I could attain happiness in both spectrum's—but I had been denied. It was no secret that she was off limits, as she was a winged being, imprisoned by my kind, by the same humans I swore to protect. Disobeying the crown would surely be a sinister price, but yet would I be willing to pay to become the hand that was to save her? Or was I to leave her behind?

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He was different, a warrior that fought in a battle that he did not wish to win. I care for him dearly, a yearning I could only feel for him. Yet, as realistically as I knew I would never escape from my imprisonment, I knew the choice he would have ultimately made. I was a fallen Angel, a thorn in the eye of this dreaded planet, yet they were right in forcing me into incarceration, for what I had been destined to do to this world would not be favorable. That man, that human however, he intrigued me and I watched as a seed grew within my body, becoming a vessel between this world and my own. I cannot lie that I was wavering in thoughts about this warrior of a different realm. Who was he to me?
New story. Was bored at work and decided to throw some ideas around. 
What do you all think of this potential story? It would be based off of two main characters.

The story would be written in first person, following both the female and male lead. 
The first half is the males introduction and the second is the females. 

Hope you enjoy! :)
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Aschiee's avatar
please continues
Or am i too late and you already continued
Ah well
THIS IS BESSST >w<